a Ya-Du - Summer Rain

Ya-Du is a Burmese poetry form

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A Ya-Du has 5 lines.
The first 4 lines have 4 syllables per line, and the fifth line can have 5, 7, 9 or 11 syllables.
Lines 4 and 5 rhyme in the normal fashion. (sight and night)
The first 3 lines and last 3 lines have climbing rhymes using the 4th, 3rd and 2nd syllables.
e.g.
My patch of sky
The part I see
From my backyard
Clouds retard sight
Of starred beauty on this Winter's night

(this Ya-Du example written by Joelsz)

(In this piece that would be: sky, I and my; backyard, retard and starred)
Ya-Du also always refers in some way to a season or seasons.

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Summer Rain

Sudden shower
Cooling mercy
Summer lightning
Flashes linger
Skies ring to a thunderous singer

©Janine Daniel

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Moderator's Award



I received this award from Joelsz at Oriental Song,
Flowing Quills, 28th Nov 2005

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